Thursday, March 17, 2011

Paper evaluation

Likes/dislikes about essay:
I liked how I was able to analyze different research I found on fad diets and kind of develop my own opinion about them. I was able to come up with some good theories to answer my question of why people fall for fad diets. Something I did not like about my paper was the last couple of paragraphs--I was not able to come up with as many questions as I did in the first part of my paper.

New questions/focus for research:
I came up with some questions about self-image and the knowledge that people have about dieting. I think I could focus my research on something like the relationship between self-esteem and weight struggles.

Experience with annotated bibliographies:
I took an English class last year at CU Boulder and I remember doing an annotated bibliography there for my research paper. From what I remember, I had to find sources and write a paragraph basically summarizing what the source said.

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