The end result

I spent an entire week proof reading my essay before today. I feel as if I could have provided more information to make it stronger but I know that I tend to over analyze everything I do so this is probably the case. The thing I disliked the most about my essay was the paragraph I included about an article I stubled across in the Auraria Library date base. I feel like it was good I touched base on the article but I also feel like it could have ruined my entire essay. I decided to leave it there incase I was wrong so I guess I will find out once I get it back. There were a lot of things I did not touch base on in my essay because I felt like I had limited space to talk about every detail and information found on my topic. For the next paper I will include the research subjects I did not include in this paper to make it more interesting and educational. I will try to look up more articles on the Auraria library website because they did have a lot of useful information I did not use in this essay. My experience with the annotated bibliography was quite inetresting. I am not one hundred percent sure if I wrote it right. I tried to mimic other annotated bibliographies, that was very helpful but still not sure if it is correct. I tend to learn from my mistakes and take contructuve feedback well so I am anxioud to see what my grade and feedback will be.