Exploratory Essay

I liked that I was able to turn all of my research into a more personal paper rather than worrying about being formal throughout my writing. I disliked that my topics were kind of scattered, it all had to do with eyes, but really my questions were so diverse and i felt it was difficult to conclude my paper without a connection to my initial question. I think I'm going to focus my research on diseases that cause people to go blind because there's only so much you can explain about how an eye works and what provides color vision verses night vision.