Overall outcome

At the end of the day I realized that the Genre analysis paper was a good learning experience. I learned about genres and what they are about, how they affect people, who they exclude and who they include and most of all what they mean. While writing this paper I discovered some areas of improvement. While drafting, I noticed that I had to change up a few of my paragraphs because they sounded repetative so repetition is something I need to work on in my next paper. A lot of fillers were used in my paragraphs as well so I need to work on not using those too. The last thing I noticed was that wordy sentences were used throughout the essay, because my startegy is different then most peoples I think that free writing before brain storming could be the reason why so many fillers, use of repetition and wordy sentences were applied. Overall I feel pretty good about my paper and I read it a few times to make sure it made sense. I have to admit that I was not a huge fan on the peer review workshops we had in class. I think I would have gotten a lot more out of this essay if I would have received your feedback after the peer revision to get a good idea of where I stood with my paper. I did good good feedback from my class mates and I applied some of their recommendations to my paper so I can't say it wasnt entirely useful. I loved working on my artifact and that was the part of this paper I liked the most.